Sunday, August 18, 2013

For Leeds City Council 6 (They Smile As They Kill) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hiding the Devil
behind your smiles
as you tear their hearts
from their souls
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Dave Alan Walker
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Chandini Jaswal 19 August 2013

A wonderful poem; It is a fact that people are way to insensitive to understand other person's plight. I am sure this poem will bring a difference in the society and her struggle will definitely not be in vain.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 18 August 2013

it's time for the devil to impose breathing tax!

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 August 2013

Yes, very true...She knew people like you will never change..No one understand the cries of others. No mercy is shown.. Beautiful poem..Loved reading it.......plus 10

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Mohabeer Beeharry 18 August 2013

You have said what I wanted to say myself, but afraid to, .i am glad, very glad. It's all true and I hear it too. Bless you. Well said Mohabeer Beeharry. Read my poems..two new ones, when you could.

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Gajanan Mishra 18 August 2013

my mother needed help, thanks my dear poet, good write.10

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