For Leeds City Council 5 (The Forgotten Shadows) Comments

Very well said poem on a heartfelt situation which we all have around the world, ...perfect words, The Forgotten Shadows that generally drowned their life in drink. Trouble is not many people do anything to help sadly I'm one of them...great work reagrds

An intense and heart-rending poem about the people who are not allowed to have a voice in society!

very good, reminds me of a few things that I wrote in the past.

A poem with a message to bring. It has arrived.

You may appreciate this version: tinyurl-dot-com/the-city-that-lost-its-soul Zoom in on the text size or click the main poetry page for this.

our own image how we abuse! when shall we wake up?

Have you shown this series of poems to Leeds counsellors, I am sure they will change their ways after you put them on the map. Have a read of my poem Alone on the Streets, it is similar. Here in Swansea we opened all the churches last winter for the homeless to sleep in at night. It was a good project that saved a few lives.

Poem with a very good message...True life of many people living in streets....Good write.