Sunday, September 4, 2016

For Just One Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

A galaxy looks past my heart.
It does not see;
a million billion stars are blind.
And I am looking out past souls
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Barry Middleton
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Annette Aitken 10 September 2016

Hi Barry you write with such grace...the romance...the sheer feeling of...(if only) lovely words. Annette

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Barry Middleton 15 September 2016

Ah yes Annette - if only. The most precious things are always then hardest.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 September 2016

Lovely romantic write. Very passionate in its feel n tone. Nature imagery is beautifully incorporated.

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Barry Middleton 15 September 2016

Thanks Nosheen. I love romance but it doesn't love me. Oh well.

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Dimitrios Galanis 04 September 2016

Beautifuly expressed the vital desire of our soul to be in touch with what it loves!

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Barry Middleton 15 September 2016

Thanks Dimitrios. Yes I like this little poem a lot.

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