Thursday, March 23, 2006

For Julia Dulon Comments

Rating: 5.0

One my students at Berriman Junior HS
dead now, no chance for her childish dreams
ever to unfold or fail
a drunk in a demon car
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Charles Chaim Wax
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Jerzegirl *~~ 23 March 2006

this story draws you in. If it is true, how very sad. I can just picture her sitting there with her purse, or twirling for the class.

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Esther Leclerc 23 March 2006

C.C.W. - Your slice-of-life poetry, always with a twist, is too wonderful. My heart dropped, flip-flopped and (yes) smiled while reading this poem. Thank you for this. (I have a 12 yr. old girl; I'll treasure her all the more after this.) E.L.

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