Tuesday, November 3, 2020

For Jovial Comments

Rating: 4.5

The sorrows were born
Out of my wounds
And the wounds were
As pierce as needles,
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dipak adhya
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Khairul Ahsan 04 November 2020

'I look for happines and love That is abundantly scattered And all the time stooping forward I collect them all.' - Loved these concluding lines! If I may suggest, I think a better caption of the poem would be, 'Sorrows Born Out of Wounds'.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 November 2020

A well written piece. Truly splendid....5 stars *****

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