Monday, October 30, 2006

For Jake The Boy Who Loved To Sniffed Glue Comments

Rating: ★4.5

There was once a boy I knew
Who loved to sniff strong glue
He sniffed so much
He was sticky to touch
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Francesca Johnson 30 October 2006

This poem started off really well but the flippancy of the last line ruined it, in my opinion, Vincent. Come on, you can do better than that. Glue sniffing is a very serious topic and it does kill many of our youngsters.......... Love, Fran xx

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