Friday, May 7, 2010

For Ian Comments

Rating: 4.0

They say you can't meet a man with a good heart...
They say there's no one whose worthy to have them...

I know that in this life we can only see...
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Mary Joy Lumanog
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Dale Mullock 07 May 2010

Hi Mary, Now this is an opena nd heartfelt poem that conveys both your thoughts and emotions well... yes we can all pinch ourselves when we are in the arms of lovers, gazing up at them and listening to their whispered words. So true to life too... you have to search hard to find them and can feel blessed when you do! An uplifting poem that has irish eyes smiling indeed! I am sure your saint has a halo and guides you with its light... all through the days and nights! Very good! Dale :)

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Dale Mullock 07 May 2010

Hi Mary, Now this is an opena nd heartfelt poem that conveys both your thoughts and emotions well... yes we can all pinch ourselves when we are in the arms of lovers, gazing up at them and listening to their whispered words. So true to life too... you have to search hard to find them and can feel blessed when you do! An uplifting poem that has irish eyes smiling indeed! I am sure your saint has a halo and guides you with its light... all through the days and nights! Very good! Dale :)

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Dale Mullock 07 May 2010

Hello Mary, This is a very sweet and heartfelt poem, that conveys not only your thoughts but your emotions well. Yes it is so nice to have 'The one' in your arms looking up at you, whispering nice things. Sometimes you do have to pinch yourself lol! I think Irish eyes are smiling here as you gaze upon your saint, with halo intact and guiding. A very open and joyous poem but has a great reflection on life too, in the fact that you have to search hard for such things and can feel blessed when they are found. Good write. Dale :)

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