Tuesday, February 26, 2013

For Him I Still Cry Comments

Rating: 4.3

There was once this young girl,
With a heart so ready to love.
In her mind there was only,
One particular boy that she could think of.
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Crystal Castro
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Khairul Ahsan 07 August 2013

A very touchy love story. I wonder what went wrong and why you had parted ways. The feelings of love that automatically oozes out from you just at the thought of him, are quite intense. waiting to hear more about this love story. gave 10/10.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 04 August 2013

wow, very nice poem painting a love story in verse love will always find a way

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Crystal Castro

Crystal Castro

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