Sunday, December 21, 2014

For Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

That laugh revives a warm memory.
Shoulders rolling hair swinging
That year a familiar territory
as near as last Saturday
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M.J. Lemon
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Pallavi Tripathi 15 March 2023

So poetic! In love with your pen, mind and soul.

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M.J. Lemon 16 March 2023

Many thanks, Pallavi.

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Rob Lamberton 01 December 2022

What a gift it is when she loves your sense of humor! !

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M.J. Lemon 07 December 2022

Thank you, Rob. And it is the greatest gift.

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Varsha M 04 March 2021

Forget the rest but don't forget the best the laughter push

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Varsha M 04 March 2021

Magical healer, the laughter. So well penned. Indeed i laugh reading this.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 March 2021

A happy poem for happy people

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 December 2020

FOR HER SAKE I CHANGED MY POEM FOR THEE STEAL TO STEEL LAUGH PLEASE MJL JUST HER SQUEEZE

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M.J. Lemon 30 December 2020

Laugh for sure...steel from steal....perfection, Poet!

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Yiyan Han 20 October 2020

MVD's laughter has already made the carafe full - We live in memory.

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Mj Lemon 27 October 2020

Thank you so much, Yiyan.

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Mj Lemon 09 September 2020

Thank you so very much, Susan. I think we all need someone like this.

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Susan Williams 06 September 2020

That was so warm with tenderness and friendship and love. I think we all want a friend or a love or a friendly love or a loving friend who brightens our day with simple companionship and an image or two of a smile or a laugh or an understanding glance to carry with us when our day goes drab or cold. Such a lovely poem, M.J.10+++++++++++++++++++

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Mj Lemon 19 July 2020

Thank you, Kumarmani! Very much appreciated.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 June 2020

I'll fill the carafe You can keep troubles at bay just bring that laugh.....loved these lines. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing,

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Valsa George 14 March 2020

That year a familiar territory as near as last Saturday.................... The meeting of some lovely persons we admire, their gestures of love like a hearty laugh, a pleasant remark, a gentle nod.... all such things though must have happened years ago will lie in our memory as fresh and new as something that happened just recently! Beautifully expressed, Lemon!

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Mj Lemon 26 March 2020

In the memories, but ever present! Thank you so much, Valsa.

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Chinedu Dike 08 January 2020

A concise and insightful composition with touching expressions. Beautifully and movingly penned. Thanks for sharing, Lemon.

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Mj Lemon 09 January 2020

Many thanks, Chinedu.

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A B Faniki 01 September 2019

A well crafted poem with words what evoke fun mories. I can relate. Greate piece. Thanks 4 sharing

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Mj Lemon 01 September 2019

Good to hear that you can relate...this is a great memory. Thank you A B.

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Jane Campion 18 July 2019

A warm laugh brings memories alive. Thank you dear poet for your comments.

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Mj Lemon 19 July 2019

Many, thanks, Jane.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 July 2019

beautiful poetic expression/// come come o babe with that laugh with the opening heart of smile..........//

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Mj Lemon 04 July 2019

Much appreciated, Mahtab.

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Leeann Azzopardi 31 May 2019

this poem has lighten my heart

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Mj Lemon 31 May 2019

So good to hear. Thank you, Leeann.

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Shakil Ahmed 22 August 2018

nice poem well-composed, thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 22 August 2018

Thank you, Shakil.

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Riza Braholli 31 July 2018

You can keep troubles at bay just bring that laugh... How we need to laugh! Well-organized poetry with frugal but strong artistic expression... congratulations poet... dr. Riza

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Mj Lemon 01 August 2018

Thank you so very much, Riza.

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A friend who can revive a warm memory and bring a smile on your face is a true friend. This beautiful friendship deserves a full score too.10+++

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Mj Lemon 16 May 2018

Geeta, thank you so very much.

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