Thursday, November 19, 2015

For Heaven's Sake Comments

Rating: 4.4

Stop the bloodshed, the senseless war
Stop the genocide, the ruthless slaughter
This world is no place for irrational fight
What about love, brotherhood and light
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Nosheen Irfan
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Christopher Tye 07 September 2016

Wonderful poem, the world needs peace more than ever.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2016

What kind of world do we live in? The very question in the minds of many. Yes! We need peace than, hatred and war. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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A compelling and creative cry that can change our wounded world if heeded! Well done my friend!

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Manonton Dalan 07 January 2016

war machines are using our love, emotions, pride etc to sell their weapons...it's all business

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Shakil Ahmed 19 November 2015

a beautiful poem with a nice ending, you have painted your passions very well in poetic language, thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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