Tuesday, November 13, 2007

For Freedom Comments

Rating: 5.0

Remember them, for they were once like you,
With hopes, emotions, days of grey and blue.
Accepting combat, trying to win through,
To fight again, for freedom.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 07 April 2008

Like the structure, excellent content too, great poem. Andrew

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Duncan Wyllie 25 November 2007

You have put alot into this Ernestine, and I think you have done us proud, What a lady What a STAR* Love duncan X

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Alison Cassidy 22 November 2007

Exceptional poem Ernestine, intensely moving and crafted with great skill and competence. I thank my luck stars that I was born at a time when I didn't have to watch my sons go off to war - I don't know how I would have coped. Lest we Forget. love, Allie xxxx

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Raynette Eitel 13 November 2007

This is extremely well-written, Ernestine, not an easy thing to do when you work with rhyme. And the sentiment expressed here is global. Raynette

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