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Dear Hasmukh Bhai, Your prayer must have been very powerful and sincere which resulted in getting rains. People in India pray when there are no rains. If they pray regularly there would be regular rainfall. Didn't Kabir say that in difficulties people remember God not when they are happy, if they remember in happiness there would be no misery? Dukha me sumiran sab karai, sukh me karai na koy | Jo sukh me sumiran karai dukh kahe ko hoi || KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Sep 04,2012

Andrea Edwards This poem is a little confusing for me. I like how the poem feels, with how it slowly drawls through the idea of drought but I feel like it is lacking in a description of actual rain. From my visits to arid places, I have discovered that although it may rain, the rain will rarely touch the ground if it is too hot, and the description, paired with the image are telling me that is what type of place this is, whereas the hope just from the thunder alone, which in itself can be dry, is saying a different story. I believe this story could be improved with a description of the rain itself instead of just about to shower and going into the conclusion.

Queeny Gona, Fatima Bhanu Rashid and Jen Walls like this. Fatima Bhanu Rashid Loved your poem.Were it not for God, the animals would have been the worst sufferers for no fault of theirs... 2 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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More Post I loved it Marisol Rodriguez20 minutes ago I loved it because it showed you are caring and of the problems we are facing. That you have a strong belief.It talks of the plight of the animals and of the drought that would cause them to wither and die. But you believed in the power of prayer and they were answered. Comment +1 The end is upon us.

ERWIN CARABALLO43 minutes ago Good work! Comment +1 nice

Trang26 minutes ago God must have heard it from animal side We deserve no sympathy from any side beautiful Comment +1 A thoughful mind

Dip Schon34 minutes ago Pensive mood

Sky looked naked As if some one had staked