Sunday, June 29, 2008

For Every Storm Comments

Rating: 4.3

For every storm there is a room
And find the palace now,
From deserts are a tomb and gloom,
Where clothes must just allow.
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Naveed Akram
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Chinedu Dike 25 June 2019

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing and remain enriched.

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Iftekhar Ifti 27 February 2019

“For every storm there is a room” There is deep thought you expressed. Nice

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Prabir Gayen 06 January 2019

The storm shall grow at all the speed That problems make us mad, You did not follow, or then bleed As madness is your dad......very fine expression..

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Howard Savage 07 February 2016

For very storm there is a room, a very profound poem.

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Howard Savage 03 January 2016

A very encouraging poem good writing, concerning reality.

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Heather Wilkins 27 October 2014

for every storm there is a room and find the palace now and the storms will continue a good read

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 October 2014

Everything has got the reason, every reason has got the room....broom broom broom that's what i conceived..Naveed thanks a lot

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Kelvin Owusu 30 October 2012

A great piece of poetry

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Ken E Hall 14 May 2010

For every storm there is our castle and dad will use his sword.pity my did'nt he took off when I was four ..good poem open to different thoughts...regards

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Michael Gale 06 January 2010

Great poem. An easy ten was given here. God bless us all-MJG.

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Beauty Philosophy 15 August 2009

A beautifully penned poem. You're completely right; for every storm there is a room, so i invite you to read my poem 'A poetess wrath', and see how can a storm, a tempest and a great feeling of WRATH can result in a beautiful piece of poetry.

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sumaira .....ir 19 January 2009

Beautifully write.. Had a different touch...

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Eddie Roa 12 January 2009

Hi! I’m Eddie Roa and I just got in to this website. By chance I came across your name in the list of poets and read some of your works. I have posted some of my poems today and yesterday. My style ranges from light to dark poetry (modern enough but not postmodern) and some Japanese verse forms like haiku, senryu and tanka. I hope you will bother to check out my work. Thanks and happy writing.

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Adeline Foster 02 July 2008

This is a good poem. Yes, to be reread and the desert theme can be felt. Although I expected the last word to read “For in madness we are clad.” to go along with the clothing reference. Still very good. Adeline

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Greenwolfe 1962 29 June 2008

I gave this a 10 because I believe I understand it, and if I can, I figure others can as well. This is a magnificent poem to read again and again. There aren't many of those. GW62

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