Thursday, November 27, 2008

(for Donall) My Birthday Comments

Rating: 3.3

You came to me,
your smile embracing me,
your arms opening to hold me
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Janice Windle
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Ruth Walters 03 December 2009

Another lovely poem Jan, a pleasure to read. Birthdays are so special. Ruthie

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Kee Thampi 24 July 2009

we love your kiss of words bathing in the light of your energy,

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Onelia Avelar 03 December 2008

To be 'lifted, raised from the day's grey'. The grey days are so cleverly juxtaposed to a colorful rainbow. It is a lifting optimistic poem. Happy Birthday dear Jan! BR, one

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