Saturday, November 1, 2008

For Dino. Comments

Rating: 4.5

Storms and tempest,
make me cringe no more.
Like a cork on the sea,
i bob and drift.
...
Read full text

roshini samuel
COMMENTS
Kesav Easwaran 01 June 2009

'Resillient against the currents and tide in this ocean called life. Rusty rudder and corroded decks, i steer with trepidation of sweat'... Eloquently expressed...these lines constitute the soul of the theme inside...good poetry, Roshni...10

0 0 Reply

Roshini you posess an incredable ability of word power.You facinate me with your words. Keep it up. My favorite is 'For Dino' 10...

0 0 Reply
Ivan Ng 01 November 2008

I get the message about indecision, but the structure makes it difficult to read.

0 0 Reply
roshini samuel

roshini samuel

Atlantis
Close
Error Success