Thursday, November 20, 2008

(for Dónall) Substitution Comments

Rating: 5.0

It takes:
a pair of pink woolly socks;
a pair of fleecy lilac pyjamas
(with long sleeves) :
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Janice Windle
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Onelia Avelar 23 November 2008

It is said that nature abhors the vacuum and free spaces, though... the substitution is often far from analogy. I love your witty artificial makeshift (made of 50% polyester!) . Wonderful piece!

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Billy Joe Collins 20 November 2008

beautiful poem showing true feeling about your love one well wrote

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