Tuesday, September 2, 2008

(for Dónall) Shadows Comments

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Shadows will pass
the sky patterned blue and white
a little rain must fall
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Janice Windle
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Onelia Avelar 04 September 2008

It sounds very authentic asian with all these shadows, rain and golden sun, there is some composed passion beyond the calm... 'more warm golden sun arrives and our shadows meld as one'...

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Donall Dempsey 04 September 2008

Ah we are sunlight and shadow dancing among leaves...each one and...the other...let us always be so! love Donall Donall

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