Tuesday, November 18, 2008

(for Dónall) Parting Comments

Rating: 5.0

We kiss, we kiss,
deep
in the heart of London,
deep
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Janice Windle
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Onelia Avelar 23 November 2008

It sounds so winded by running or by deep kissing, breathy poem. Poets kissing in the heart of London with one eye (fearless) to the cupid :) Though about parting, its not a sad poem; it somehow banishes all fears and leaves the reader optimistic.

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David Harris 19 November 2008

Janice, parting of any sort are always sad. A beautiful poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. Hugs David

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