(for Dónall) Love Song Comments

If I sculpt with my hands Your curving hips; With my tongue, part Your waiting lips; Rachl Ann Butler

I am caught in your net.. I keep wanting to read and read.. and read.. its that good

A melodious love song, especially the the last stanza is nice.

What can I say that already hasn't been said? 'Cept to say it must've been mighty fine love to have you in such a lather! What a gorgeous poem, I can feel the sparks flying between the two of you in this rendition of how it all happened. Divine penning Jan. HG: -) xx

Hi! I'm back to worship at the shrine of the hat and the beautiful love you kept so shyly under it. My mind is reaching out its cold little hands and warming itself at your words. Such gentle gentleness gently infusing the thought in word and deed. Lucky man! Lucky man indeed! love Donall Donall

I keep coming back to this...I am in love with this poem and want to elope with it. It hath me under its spell...fresh and direct as a kiss. It speaks to me...it speaks the language of love! Love sits upon you beautifully and you wear it well. love Donall Donall

Oh Sid John Gardner, I have to reply to you - you've surely made a typo... you must mean MATCH of the day! And neither of us a football fan, either!

Truely beautiful Janice, easy to the eye and soft on the heart 10 Paris x

Catch of the day Janice? ....Nice hat. Sid.

Now, why on earth would I completely and utterly adore this beautiful piece? any ideas? just any remote idea at all? :) hugs, t x

Just so beautiful...won my heart over at once! So heavens knows what it did to the man it was written for. So perfect and precise in its little details that tell so much so that our heartbeat beats with your heartbeat and we too sweat and fall...sweat and fall...in love. I am in love with this poem...it's beautiful beyond belief. love GinaX

Sumptuously sensual! And so summery. I love it. Fx

I just love the simplicity of it.........................

Mmmmm...lucky him! Lucky you! love Dee Dee Wright