Saturday, August 2, 2008

(for Dónall) At Last, The Man I Had Not Met Comments

Rating: 5.0

His chin,
cleft with Y-shaped hollow
like the subtle dent
where buttocks meet with spine.
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Janice Windle
COMMENTS
Onelia Avelar 05 September 2009

Lucky him really :) women poetess are more often sparing of description of their lovers, except the lesbian poetess like Sappho maybe. You get in the details and paint, yes, you paint a portrait of words, with a lot of light and love. Wonderful Portrait of the man as a loved one, Jan!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 27 August 2008

I never read such terrific descriptions of a man......make the masculine proud! ! !

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A very lucky man. What feelings your words engender! What happiness your words disclose. I'm very happy for you.

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Donall Dempsey 02 August 2008

Oh lucky man! Oh lucky him...to be thus known and known thus... in love. Now I know you hoped and I know you wished but...there ain't nothing like the real thing. This man is made beautiful by being adorned with your love...he(obviously) wears your love...like Heaven. Like Heaven! Happy lady...lovely lady...may love smile on you and you two. Wear his kisses like a beautiful jewelery...dress only in the caresses of his devotion. love Donall Donall

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Kris Smith 02 August 2008

Happy poem, happy lady, lovely write happy for you 10 Paris

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....'the reality of the man I've met and love'. Jan, you make my heart sing, and this is the most beautiful of pieces. And methinks entirely accurate. Hugs, t x

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