Thursday, August 28, 2008

(for Dónall) And Why Not? / To The Ends Of The Earth / Island At The End Of The Earth Comments

Rating: 3.3

These poems were written after I met Dónall and we spent days and nights together for the whole of August, getting closer and more loving all the time. Now we've had to go back to work, live separately in the week, and it's been a wrench to say the least. Dónall's response to the situation follows my desperate attempt at a solution to the problem:
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I have a plan.
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Janice Windle
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Ruth Walters 01 November 2009

Such heart felt poetry from both of you................... Ruthie

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Colin J... 15 March 2009

Is this not what Love Is? ... Beautiful... Make it So... Colin J...10...

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Original Unknown Girl 10 September 2008

Sigh.... all of the pieces are achingly beautiful. Your love for each other is palpable. I am so very happy for you both. HG: -) xx

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 September 2008

A lovely compositon on love, I love it.

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Donall Dempsey 05 September 2008

And why not indeed! Let's go for it! love Donall Donall

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Chitra - 05 September 2008

beuatifully executed and the title is apt too...goes beyond the materialistic level

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Kesav Easwaran 04 September 2008

Outside there, the ‘world circle’ reels...leaving alone this ‘streaming’ circle, the poetess wishes to be ever (resisting siege) inside the unchanging ‘arm circle’ of her soul mate...only minimum needs in demand...and those needs are surprisingly ‘free to take luxuries’ also... nothing more than love and only love...a poem written artfully good 10/10

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Onelia Avelar 30 August 2008

I like the closing desperate lines 'And we shall lie in bed, Resisting siege.' - the bed is a barricade against the chaos outside. It is so simply beautiful your plan. I love the simple beauty of the poem, the unsophisticated beauty of your wish. And why not? Well said!

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Roger Cornish 28 August 2008

Wonderful! Just like John and Yoko.

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Zoe Howarth 28 August 2008

awww. thats really cute. xD theres something about this poem that i like, alot. i cant pin point what it is yet, but just know i like it xD zoe. xx

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