(for Dónall) A Summer Day - To Dónall On His Birthday Comments
It was a summer's day when we first met
the memories are clear - I won't forget -
traffic noise, new faces, beer and sweat -
that summer day when you and I first met.
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Warm - tender - happy love poem Jan.... good to read of your discovery of love for each other - - honestly written and a joy to read..... greetings and bestest of wishes from Fay. in Cornwall U.K.
Wonderful use of repetition, this poem is like a little merry-go-round of love. The interesting form has got me thinking of the rondeau, the villanelle and such like, and I love the idea of resetting one's compass. I'm off in search of kilt-clad adonis - knee-to-knee company sounds perfect! S ;)
Such a fresh, beautiful and romantic love poem Janice. May your love blossom for evermore and all your dreams come true. 10 Karin Anderson
Janice, ahhh sweet memories. The new faces then friends now. Wish him a HAPPY Birthdey from Dodgy and Vera. Top marks for this wonderful piece. Hugs David
A touching write Janice, may you both always be happy and in love, 10 Lynda
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A wonderful tale of romance and love......... Ruthie: o)