Monday, September 22, 2008

(for Dónall) A Deserving Case For Love? Comments

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Do I deserve
your promise of eternal love?
I ask myelf, and myself replies
'Of course you don't deserve
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Janice Windle
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Onelia Avelar 25 September 2008

Wonderful poem, Janice. The question about deserving someone's love arises often, it actually arises always when we feel happy. Maybe there is a fear of losing something if it is not deserved. It is so human, sincere, touchy your poem and the fear beyond the words perceivable... It comes to me to say, do not be afraid, everything will be allright :) . Best wishes, onelia

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