Monday, August 24, 2020

For Consensus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Piercing ribs of
Assent
and dissent
Blows on—a humming wind
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Rahman Henry
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Mahtab Bangalee 24 August 2020

great thought in the third and fourth stanza; here, I think, your birds - symbol of the universal delegation and existence of world unity; birds are independent, has no border, can fly hither to thither everywhere; so if the humans are the crown creation of Creator why they will live by making frontier fences

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 August 2020

A well inked composition. Simply amazing and splendid....10+++

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M Asim Nehal 24 August 2020

Profound poem with a touch of satire on political boundaries. Neither nature nor aminals are bound by the lines we draw to demarcate our country, they are free from it. Thoughtful poem 10++

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Rahman Henry

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Natore, Bangladesh.
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