For Can I Play With Madness, Comments

i like this poem...for can i play with madness? ! ...breaking walls

Thought provoking, madness sometimes overcome our sanity..... its human though!

Far too preachy...lacks substance.A true storyline....I see you are still obsessed with employing commas at a pandemic rate.....Find a library and allot yourself some quality time to Read your Contemporary Poets, PLEASE! What you are writing here is nothing but rant and as far as literary quality is concerned is anemic of every basic principle of even mediocre verse...My suggestion is that instead of using your spare time to play I.P. Stat games, that you use that time to diligently learn how to pen meritable poetry....unless you honestly feel that you have no desire to improve on your current quality of creative writing...The choice is yours and my comments are not meant to chastize or impune your work....The stat scamming is entirely another issue which I find foolish and self-impuning....~FjR~

madness is a peak when looses light

No one can play with madness for it will get the upper hand and overtake you. Unless you play the the game well and stay up ahead then only will you be able to get a foothold and get loose. Good luck!

With no support from the top, Will this madness ever stop! ! ! We all know what's best, But no-one listens, so **** the rest I try to lead, to grab these tattered reins, But no-one listens, So everything is the same............................. d message was passed. good 1

This reminds me why I took early retirement. Well said.