Sunday, March 22, 2009

For But A Moment Comments

Rating: 2.7

The wind touches soft
Upon my neck
Like a lovers breath.
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Debra A.G. Hawley
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Scarlett Treat 23 March 2009

I liked this, for I could visualize the hair, as it moved aside...for the gentle touch of the wind...and, for just that moment...I believed also... Good work!

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