Tuesday, June 30, 2009

For Better Or Worse Comments

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Left all My friends, my entire life
for promises of better days, its all a lie
your the only good, to come of me being here
its already been over half of a year
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John Johnston
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T Brwn 29 July 2009

i have onticed that you often write about how everything that goes wrong in the 'relationship' is your fault. a relationship involves two (or more) poeple, and its not all your fault. ever heard the saying 'it take two to tango' maybe its the other persons fault, jsut you cant see it, or maybe its shared. dont always blame yourself. well written,

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Hailey Agnew 02 July 2009

awww i love it you're such an amazing poet... how do you rhyme like that? its amazing. this is one of my favourites. its so sweet :)

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Jasmin Bell 30 June 2009

another great poem(not suprisingly)

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