For Awhile You Were Mine..... Comments

Gorgeous penning Patricia and fantastic news about your book deal! I am so proud of you, with poems this good it's no surprise to me at all.... Well Done You. HG: -) xx

Absolutely excellent imagry, telling a most beautiful love story of an angelic dream. I truly enjoyed the read Patricia--Thankyou--Melvina--

Beautiful and romantic.I especially loved 'dancing on billowing white clouds ' and floating with the angels.' Sometimes the most perfect and purest love can be found in our dreams and there it is safe and forever ours to keep....mm.

I was touched by this great work of yours not only because it's marvellous itself, but because it reminded me of my super favorite song 'You were mine' performed by THE DIXIE CHICKS.....'when for so long, you were mine', as it goes.

This is so moving Patricia, capturing a heart, and holding on to a dream Love duncan X

Elegant and romaticly thoughtful as ever, Patricia, Pleasure to read.

Beautiful. Simply Beautiful.

'Eyes closed, with hearts wide opened' - a lovely phrase. And a lovely poem, Patricia. Soft and luxuriously dreamy........ Love, Fran xxx

How wonderful to share this(that) with someone.