Thursday, February 16, 2012

For As Molten Metal Bound Are We Not In The Magma Comments

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Love if only I could love the stone core of your heart
Love you like the vine that splits and climbs a rock face
Love you like a sun orbiting the moon—what art
Tendril dripping over the craters could we I erase.
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Mark Heathcote
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Seamus O Brian 26 September 2016

Love this work. Love the exquisite imagery of the first stanzas. (the spell checker missed the mutation of lava to larva- although humorous, detracts a trifle) Great piece!

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Mark Heathcote 26 September 2016

Thanks for the comment, Neal, I’m a terrible speller and many of my poems need a good editing, I’ve edited a 10th of them this year & I hope to do more. :)

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