Wednesday, December 2, 2009

For All Those Girls Comments

Rating: 4.2

Love, such a twisted word
With a sick and corrupted mind
Justifying
The stains on the knees of her blue-white pants
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Bethany Waters
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Antonio Liao 09 December 2009

wow! wonderful...so bright poem of today's poetry...so naive and realistic of what then the past.....just making of history rewritten in the lines of words...perfect concept...God bless....a 10 +++++

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The Lost.. 05 December 2009

a very nice poem, i really like it.keep writing and thank u for sharing :)

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Mandara Pookal 04 December 2009

Some hate, some distrust, some sorrow and some undying feel........that is what I make of your poem that does not believe in that four letter word called love.......but time will only tell that love binds all............mandara

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Shamik Kumar Bose 04 December 2009

Bethany, your poem portrays the cheap side, the wrong side of love in a very clear way. The twist is understandable, your warnings for all the girls are loud and clear, your expressions are genuine, full with blood. Very nice Poem 10.

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I apologize on behave of my kind. Love is also a sweet word. :) .. i did like your poem.

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