For All Ages Comments

Every step taken with caution wins all strife

More sppealing.

The world is full of adversaries but ever with some moral inherent in it.

(cont.) literal vs figurative (wording) : Literal language means exactly what it says, while figurative language uses similes, metaphors, hyperbole, and personification to describe something often through comparison with something different.'

Anjandev, I left ***** and 2 comments in 2024. I STILL LIKE THIS POEM VERY MUCH! ! It is well said but perhaps would be better for some readers (maybe me) if it were more 'literal rather than figurative'**** ? (see below) (cont.)

The road whispers truths untold, In silence, destinies unfold. Yet, falls make journeys bold.

Wow what a wonderful depiction of life. Great metaphorical piece!

Every unforeseen fall of a traveller is mourned silently by the road that leads. Highly philosophical

Very interesting but....could you rewrite it in a way I can understand your meanings better? I'm not too smart! : ))) bri

The silent scream!

Yes, the world for all ages

A great piece indeed in your characteristic and unique style. Lots of depth.

Brilliant poem! ! ! ! !

Too much a lovely poem and full of truth...to fall is to rise only and that is the truth of life...liked

My heart screams in silence. thank you for sharing.

Life with its uncertainties takes some unexpected turns. However, we keep moving on until death comes knocking

Every fall is a learning experience to sum up the journey

'But in vain', yes that's the absolute truth for all ages!

A revisit with much pleasure! It's already on my favourite list as well with full score.

As always, a poem with deep insight, meaning and philosophy. Great Anjandev.....10