Monday, April 1, 2019

For A Virtual Love (Bella Williams) Comments

Rating: 4.8

you've given me the excitement of a dream
gold begets golden shining life
o' there is glittering
every glitter is not gold!
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Brian Johnston 04 April 2019

Down my friend I suspect she is looking under many mushrooms!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 April 2019

DEAR MAHTAB, IS THIS POEM CREATED FOR......APRIL FOOL´s DAY? Or just for All Golden Glitterings the USA Way? Thank you for sharing this brilliant poem, with much care, SFC

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 April 2019

When this Golden Leaf was knocking at my door? Before I could open the door, this Golden glittering was on my floor, since this Golden appearance had no poems at all, I told her lovingly, please do not come through my wall we said goodbye to each other, I wished her much success with another........YOU wrote an excellent poem, MB.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 April 2019

Venus, there are Cupid I'm! No! Yes! for you; for your love thoroughly through the minutes of breath in this poetic life………… Or GOLDEN LIFE, perhaps? Ever heard about CHEMISTRY? Chemistry that comes quickest to me and I let her out quicker than quickest. Through these " Riddles" I try to have your serious attention, she comes from another dimension. YOU are my PH friend, I do really care about you. Amazing poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 April 2019

it's fire; a piece of fire into me through the virtual shadow no phantom I believe (I've hugged it) eyed heart there is a cell of love sweetly plays the rhythm of the MUSE.......................I assure you dear PH friend, that I have never had a MUSE, still no MUSE

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 April 2019

I've found you o' leaf, girl leaf you are on my path Teetotaler I'm on wandering I've kissed its softness......................................she WAS on mine either, Mahtab, O Mahtab............. soft warming trembles my lips

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 April 2019

you've given me the excitement of a dream gold begets golden shining life o' there is glittering every glitter is not gold! I know-..................................DEAR MAHTAB, IN THIS VIEW, WE LOOK LIKE SIAMESE TWINS, REALLY! I HAVE seen that Gold either. Thank you for your honest poem. God´s Blessings.

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