Sunday, May 19, 2013

For A Straggling-Stalk Of Green Corn Comments

Rating: 4.5

With barely a whisper
I was almost blown over
Like a straggling-stalk
Of green corn, I'm bent
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Mark Heathcote
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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 September 2016

Heartiest Congrats on the poem of the Day.

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Bharati Nayak 26 September 2016

Congratulations for being Poet of the Day.A beautiful poem, .I came to read it many times.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 26 September 2016

Lovely rendering, Mark. Congratulations for poem of the day. You deserve it. All said and done, I would have expected you to leave some explanatory notes below the poem. I believe this is a song sung by a girl waiting for her towering boy. The two question marks in the body of the poem are intriguing. (10)

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Mark Heathcote 26 September 2016

I wish I could have edited this one before today, as I’ve done with some others. The backdrop for this may have been a movie like Cold Mountain, primarily a song. Madame Butterfly type of thing, while I felt connected to the emotions imagined. I haven’t read it since I wrote it. But I recall writing very fast glad it is well received my friend. Thank you, Madathil it is much appreciated.

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Kim Barney 26 September 2016

Congratulations on poem of the day! A very good poem. To make it even better, change 'dessert' to 'desert'. Dessert with two S's is like cake or ice cream.

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Mark Heathcote 26 September 2016

I wish I could have edited this one before today, as I’ve done with some others. I have done that now, but it isn’t showing that as yet. I’m a bit dyslexic at times. Mnay thanks for this lovely comment Kim it is much appreciated.

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Seamus O Brian 26 September 2016

Very expressive imagery. Leaves one looking over the horizon, watching the corn sway and wondering....

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Mark Heathcote 26 September 2016

Much obliged Neal thank you kindly... :)

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Savita Tyagi 26 September 2016

Lovely poem Mark. There is a little suspense and anticipation here. That army soldier must be a very intimate part of your life and personality. Congratulations for this poem of the day recognition for your poetic talent.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 September 2016

Almost blown over! Thanks for sharing.

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Mark Heathcote 26 September 2016

Many thanks for the comment Edward I like it. hehe

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Dave Greenwald 26 September 2016

A very fine poem. Thank you so much for sharing your skill as a poet.

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Mark Heathcote 26 September 2016

Many thanks Dave much obliged sir!

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