For A Peaceful Life! Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

For A Peaceful Life!

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He came to your vale as a cool breeze
And those sad stories he whispered,
In your ear were all about his life
That loser admitted all his helplessness
When his mind blew up with pains,
But you forgot to come to his lonliness
You were not listening there to a stranger,
But to a man who was cheated by everyone
Or to a man who was defeated by his dreams,
Or to a man who was lost by his hopes,
8ut you never knew that he was dying,
In every moment and every second of his life
From day to night or dawn to dusk he sighed
That wanted him to go away from you
But how a broken winged bird can fly?
How can he soar again into his sky?
How can he forget you when you're in his heart?
And still remembered by his heart beats
He will be with you until his heart stops
As he knows well about his reality,
That his heart may stop at anytime
But he will then meet you as your silent tears
He will then live in your memories for ever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 01 February 2012

Not a pure peaceful...but it a sincere heart tells here..You know Vipins, when you lost in a jungle, could you think the trees help you out? ? you think the forest tell you where you to go to discover? HMmm NO dear...It all depend on yourself...if you never trust yourself to break the fears and to make a decision then you will stuck in the jungle forever...but look there, you have great mind, beautiful knowledge..listen to the soul, cue of life...there are many things you can gain by yourself to out from lost...find the river and look the stars..you will be back home again...your dream is a place where you need to find which way to choose and each one has it's own difficulties, but if you stuck and lost hope...never reach the place you call dream..and dream just be a truest dream only...Vipins, you so wise never let this young age with surrender heart...try till end of your breathes..at least we try..bird when the wings broken, it cant fly but when it healed and believe to fly again then it can..if it never believe and trauma..just stay in that tree..._Unwritten Soul

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 02 February 2012

Soul said it all, your emotions are well captured in this great poem....Vip my friend, things happen for a reason..maybe the time is not write now.seasons dont rush each other through the year, they wait for their time then come and play their parts..great thing are worth waiting for.

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Madan M 14 February 2012

a peace is blessed here, and how can forget when he is there..

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 11 February 2012

Never forget, what you see in others it is in you. Look at this way. You cannot stop and send him away, you have to stop that what you see in them in yourself and lift them up and not to help them suffer and pull yourself down too into the deepest negative state. We have good people in our life, listen to them, and we have not so good ones. Be kind to all, but work on your own belief and do not let them pull you down into their reality. I wish you the best.

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Wahab Abdul 09 February 2012

PEACE AND PEACE WE ALL NEED IN OUR LIVES IN OUR SOCIETY IN EVERY WHERE SO THE POEM DESERVES 100/100.

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Dave Walker 09 February 2012

A really great poem, a real emotion packed poem. A fantastic write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2012

But to a man who was cheated by everyone Or to a man who was defeated by his dreams, , , sincere call... beautiful lines

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