For A Lovely Butterfly Comments

Make your umbrella Before comes heavy rain Thus plough every potential And every technique do apply To mold your caterpillar Into lovely butterfly. very nice. perhaps you should call your poem 'into a butterfly' just an opinion. to 'plough every potential' and 'apply every technique' without giving up is necessary for success. nicely expressed. beautiful imagery. butterfly-catterpillar. plough-ing potentials. thx for sharing