Wednesday, December 13, 2006

For A Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

there's been many days when all the world's black
when i have hid it with a breaking smile
and you have shown me just for what i am
a broken child
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Ben Partenay
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Mona Martinez 29 January 2009

wow! ! ! short but, lovely. straight from the heart are the best poems.

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Steffi Webster 28 April 2008

A heartwarming poem that I much enjoyed. Brief but effective. xxx

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Amanda Lukas 13 December 2006

A loveable poem! I'm delighted to have stumbled across it. Take care, Amanda

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Ernestine Northover 13 December 2006

That is a delight to read Ben, what a lovely write, with a beautiful last verse. So well expressed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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