Monday, June 30, 2008

For A Girl About A Girl Comments

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An emotional height was never my delight
I see a smile, but your eyes tell a story
A while, since you've had any glory.
An extended hand, but yet I say I understand
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Robert Trew
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Ency Bearis 30 June 2008

nice start... a good write.. keep up your work.. soon you'll realize you had composed so many.. Best Wishes, Ency Bearis

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