Thursday, July 23, 2015

For A Friend In An Asylum In California Comments

Rating: 4.8

Give me lazy lithium
days, soft asylum, Cheshire madness.
This sadness only
lasts
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Thomas Case
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Norah Tunney 22 March 2017

Poignant and beautiful! ! ! you capture so much emotion in this short succinct poem. A strawberry fields forever flavour but with an underlying sense of loneliness and longing reaching its peak in the last two lines. Lovely poem Thomas

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