Friday, August 9, 2013

For A Free Life Comments

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'When the Sun and the Sea mated
Heated upward their sweat flowed
With cool breeze they warmly kissed
Born we droplets glided and rained.'
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Narayanan Nair. P Perunthanam
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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 12 August 2013

good poem with good imagery and strong message too thanks for sharing

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Valerie Dohren 10 August 2013

Like Valsa, especially like the last stanza - beautiful, with a great message.

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Valsa George 09 August 2013

When we know this unity divine Bond of Love will bind us all fine That makes our life free of strain And bakes ever bread from grain. Love these lines! A delightful read! !

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