Thursday, January 19, 2012

For A Day... Just! Comments

Rating: 4.5

In the middle is a jungle of thoughts
A collection of serious confusion and sting,
Right in this grumbling bursting head
Is a brain that shakes from vibrations of loss,
...
Read full text

Clemence Wega
COMMENTS
Unwritten Soul 19 January 2012

nice poem and as heading to the end of line, you did Amazing way toward ending...Look on trees, one the branches cut and broken see, if there's new shoot start...and see soon it will be another branches that will change the new life of tree...like tree or in you, we can be broken and cut by sharp feelings, but that will trigger us to accept n see a new things...it hurts but it is a way helped n works_Unwritten Soul

0 0 Reply
Melancholy Man 19 January 2012

Lovely poem, very moving.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success