Thursday, November 1, 2012

For A Day.....Accepting Comments

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If only I were you... If only you were me,
We would be more accepting of what eachother believe
Accepting as to why, we are the way we are
Accepting the purpose of our lives, the distance we have travelled
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Lyn Paul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2019

If only I were you... If only you were me, We would be more accepting of what eachother believe Accepting as to why, we are the way we are Accepting the purpose of our lives, the distance we have travelled finding just how far. How far we have come in our own remarkable way.....fantastic beginning with a reality of life. Brilliant poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Owain Glyn 13 January 2013

Someone once said that to truly judge another you must walk a mile in their shoes, then along came terry Pratchett and said, that if you did that and still didn't like them, at least you'd be a mile away and they'd have no shoes to chase you with! Good work!

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Ruby Honeytip 15 November 2012

Ooohhhhh....I love this one and truly believe that calm acceptance is the key to many answers we seek. Just beautiful..Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful work x

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Darshil Sanghvi 14 November 2012

wonderful! awesome poems :)

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Unwritten Soul 05 November 2012

Accepting each other is like holding hand each other and we can swing in same direction and enjoy the movement in same direction, free and supporting in togetherness... you done a perfect meaning in such beautiful poem, loved it_Soul

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Valerie Dohren 02 November 2012

Wonderful philosophy Lyn, understanding and compassion - how much better would life be. Great write.

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