Footsteps Into Solace Comments
Behind the blue that looks out into the universe
Seeking the sanctuary of the soul
No more trying to make the best out of the worst
Only needing to take back control
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Good poem, I like the themes & concepts. You'd benefit from reading Wallace Stevens & T.S Eliot. Perhaps ending on an image rather than 'where limits no longer apply' would be more powerful. i.e 'River breeze as if to call me from the other side / The bright void through which the bird's soul flies'
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7/29/2025 9:59:31 AM # 1.0.0
Good poem, I like the themes & concepts. You'd benefit from reading Wallace Stevens & T.S Eliot. Perhaps ending on an image rather than 'where limits no longer apply' would be more powerful. i.e 'River breeze as if to call me from the other side, The bright void through which the bird's soul flies'