Thursday, May 8, 2008

Footsteps.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Heard greatest gift for man by god is love
and I too came across the cute word love in my life
each moment my girls smile cared me like my second mom
and I was like a bird flying up high in the sky
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Sebastine Humaemo
mom
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rago rago 15 May 2009

foot steps........ you are not poor yu are very rich in words and poetic sense.....and all the lines carry beautiful emotions.......well penned a fabulour write.......

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Marria Attar 19 January 2009

Very nice poem...full of feelings..wonderful! 10

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Winnie Angel 11 January 2009

true feel...xpressed what normally happen in any love affair..it may be the misunderstanding betwn the love and the beloved that made her to dropp life' an old flower'..maybe or maynot be really that the beloved dropped like an old flower........................beautiful! ! ! ! !

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Vidi Writes 10 January 2009

To remain as foot print The pavement should be of clay If one can walk in the clay And leave the foot prints Then he needn't shed his tears He is the 'Man' above all.

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Linda Moore 07 January 2009

Sweet Love, very nice writing.....10

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*Trusting You* 13 December 2008

who still lives holding his breadth expecting you .....with your thoughts good lines.... this is very well done. Crystal

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