we walk barefoot down nuclear beaches,
driven, without direction, to leave footprints.
coughing up spit, and avoiding shadows,
of small minded men following
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Impressive write...crisp structural fluxion throughout, astute employment of metaphor.Fine display of free-verse, with(imo) a wee hint of the prosaic as well...Enjoyed the read...FjR
What do you mean by small minded men? Please explain, Eric..