Wednesday, July 4, 2012

Footprints (Small Minded Men) Comments

Rating: 5.0

we walk barefoot down nuclear beaches,
driven, without direction, to leave footprints.
coughing up spit, and avoiding shadows,
of small minded men following
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Eric Cockrell
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 05 July 2012

What do you mean by small minded men? Please explain, Eric..

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Impressive write...crisp structural fluxion throughout, astute employment of metaphor.Fine display of free-verse, with(imo) a wee hint of the prosaic as well...Enjoyed the read...FjR

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