Footprints On Sand -In Top 500 Comments

Piece of great elegance, well articulated and nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing.

has a rumi like quality.. brilliant musings 10/10

n the core of my heart, A whisper I heard, Oh “jelly” its you I love. And when I peer into that Lens of Anton Von Leewenhoek Its you alone that I see.' ohhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 gosh Anju.. this is beautiful indeeed..... very romantic indeed.. this simply wonderful.. a tasty read! ! ! ! A+++++++++++ with lots of love to u shan

Like a flowing river does your pen flow.

My words of praise have their limitations, ur creativity knows no bounds...let it be this way....... For the benefit of the world that surrounds....

a romantic write with an excellent flow...romance in every line...10+

some sweet words from Hanque O From: Hanque O (United States ;) To: Anjali Sinha Date Time: 5/15/2009 3: 11: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Footprints on Sand Anjali, A very romantic poem. At first I thought you were speaking metaphorically, of God's love, but then the line 'And lose the keys//to your sublime kiss' made it clear you were back on the planet with the rest of us. I'm curious. Did you mean to write Kama, or Karma? If Kama, what significance does that hold? yours, hanque

For fate brought us together, Hope never to push us away what a super flow Anjali! ! lovely poem...10

WOW! ! ! talk about shout to the heart. i love this poem and what it means.

Enjoyed reading this poem - so full of joy and pleasantness, hope and fulfilment. I like the usual chosen metaphors and also your unusual ones (Oh “jelly” its you I love. And when I peer into that Lens of Anton Von Leewenhoek) .

Your impressions on my mind Not a foot prints on the sand But the carved pictures on solid rock Immuned to time's ruthless shock. Good images 10 out of 10+++

Great Poem! ! ! It flows with beauty!

From those articulating words, I felt the LOVE that you've been describing! ! Amazingly, it flows through...a 10 from me! ! !

a great work...i can feel the love in each words......thanks for sharing....

i think this poem is just gorgeous.. it's an amazing poem.. keep writing Anjali it'll get you far! ~Hazel G.E

well penned nice work 10

Anju my dear, I must admit the quality is superb and msg clear from heart... yaar registan nahi gayee to kya hua.. baloo ke teeloo mein chode pawan ke nissan to hai naa.. haan hawa ka jhokaa unko mita dega... tum gujartee jao apne raste raste... nissaan mitey rahnge peechey peechey... nissann na rahey... kaun chala thaa is dagar.. sorry dear.. pata nahi kya likh gaya.. per jo bhee ho.. padney ka jo bhav mila yahan likh diya...good luck and yes keep it up.. nice work of litrature too... thanks for you introducing me to this...

Beautiful poem. An amazing composition. Thank you.

It's a beautiful love poem. The following stanza is a proof of your true love: I wait to be locked in those Chains of love, And lose the keys to your sublime kiss. It deserves 10 for this stanza alone.

I have put my eyes to rest Towards my love ... Drunk have I, The wine of your love The Garden of Eden’s Paradise ... I wait to be locked in those Chains of love, And lose the keys to your sublime kiss. ... and obviously the last stanza..it has vry soft music within it..well done.thnx for sharing.god bless u