Saturday, October 5, 2019

Footprints In The Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you saw only one set of footprints,
That was when I ditched you.
And ran away.
Ran as fast I could.
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Shaun Cronick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 October 2019

Wow, what a wonderful dramatic monologue. Compelling imagery, superbly executed and crafted write. Onto my Poem List.

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Shaun Cronick 06 October 2019

Thank you Rose Marie I'm glad you liked it. Based it on the famous prayer Footprints In The Sand....And That Was When I Carried You...Just used the first line and let imagination do the rest. I have a whole week off work to finish and upload some large poems I hope you like them Rose Marie and thank you. Carried You

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