Monday, July 27, 2009

Footprints In The Sand Comments

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Footprints in the sand
As deep as they might be,
Will someday be washed away
By the wind, or by the sea.
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Randy McClave
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James Mcmahon 27 July 2009

Hi coulda bn doing wi splitting up, seemed very uneventful got bit boring? , nice idea tho, try again, you seem clever with wordsbetter than this poem shows, ill read more of your poems please feel free to comment on mine, thank you

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Randy McClave

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Ashland, Kentucky
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