Sunday, July 14, 2013

Footprints In The Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are but pilgrims
traveling on this
journey

Leaving positive
...
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Heather Burns
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 15 July 2013

Excellently penned poem, yes we leave footprints that stays forever in the minds of other people... Siya_! !

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Danny Draper 15 July 2013

An interesting and well considered addition to the well known verse.

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R.j. Wynn 15 July 2013

how will we measure up to the word and the sounds of the second coming.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 July 2013

Footprints are washed away. Their image keeps appearing in the mind. Beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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Valsa George 15 July 2013

Yes, life is a long pilgrimage to some far off destination! What we leave behind are footprints! But they never stay as many walk over them! So philosophical!

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