Footprints In The Sand Comments

You always amaze me with your rendition of words. Soulful! And wonderful use of diction. Thanks for sharing, Hazel. Remain enriched.

As she observes the great expanse of sea and sky so wide, She is drowning in the melodious ocean, Without his truth of freedom in motion, She hears his voice calling her name.....sensitive and insightful expression. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

The heart was broken due to power struggle and many other reason, though the soul of the love want to revive it..but ultimately left the foot print in the memory sand...Thank you for sharing..

This part of love is the part that makes me wonder about the validity of the saying- - It is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all. I am not sure of that.. Agony and loneliness and feeling like a loser - - just not my favorite emotions. Sigh. But who wants to live without the highs of love. So we love and get our hearts broke for it.

He holds her hand and says 'I'm sure, My only love, you and I will endure, Through the history of our time together so pure, We will reach for optimistic skies, Amazing stanza of a wonderful poem.

wonderful poem loved it thanks for sharing

true loves' imprint leaves in soul as a landmark left in heart,

In the party crowd, suddenly you find yourself lost and lonely! You feel the absence of someone and experiences a kind of pain. But the beautiful reverie into which you slowly slips revives your spirits! Can't it be the harbinger of lovely days to follow........... or just footprints to be washed away by the waves.....! Enjoyed!

Emptiness is a reason to hide! Nice work.

It is a strong love poem. I love the spirit and body of it.

The lost rhythm of life though seemingly lost in the dreary sands of time has been recaptured in the confluence of her individuality with that of her lover at least in a reverie which of course give hope to a final unification. A beautiful poem penned with lot of feelings.

The first line is a perfect introduction to the poem; through analogy, creating beautiful poetic images. It feels like a tale where the heroine, though physically present in the mundane life, she escapes in dreaming of her beloved with a tender longing vividly descriptive - the depths of the ocean, like the depths of her emotions. And his words in the penultimate stanza, completes beautifully her heart with hope, and the finale of this exquisite poem!

A nice portrait of human sentiments, feeling the absence of a lost love.