Saturday, October 4, 2008

'Footprints In Our Soul' Comments

Rating: 5.0

Age 10

We all of shoes we try to keep clean
As we walk down the roads of life
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Whitney Nicole Albright*
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Bonnie Collins 27 December 2008

Whitney, this is witten so beautifully and filled with much wisdom, I enjoyed the title and the sturcture with such an even flow.. This is so very true in life, and I really enjoy your poetry, I will be checking it out more often I can asure you... Bonnie

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Blue Eyes 11 October 2008

great metaphors i loved your way of writing keep on going

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 11 October 2008

Absolutely fantastic. The analogy leading to the message......simply amazing. Thanks a lot.

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